Oh，there are some logical error to the part 7，it make some conflict to the story from part 1 to 6 ，for example，the reason why they are intentionly swapped instead of killed， and make Harley a bad person are so suden which make the activities of Harley seem odd！
SO I advise to redo the part 7，Daniles and Bianca should find why Harley and Ralphie are involved，not because Harley was bad person，BECAUSE Officer Harley and Ralphie was also swapped because of a similiar event happened long time ago，and Harley and Ralphie also chosed to train each other to impersonate each other then and tried to work together to swap back，and the swapped Harley and Ralphie have accepted their new identity and life！ So there are no intented swap，but two accidents which make the old cop couple become crime couple and vice versa，which make old men become new women and vice versa.
Shoot I just saw your comment. I was afraid of this when I first wrote part 7. I hoped I could fill that pot hole, apparently not very well. Let me see what I can do, Now that Part 8 is out, and I'm not willing to rewrite two captions (time becoming an issue) I'll need to find a way to fix this error without effecting part 8.
Oh，there are some logical error to the part 7，it make some conflict to the story from part 1 to 6 ，for example，the reason why they are intentionly swapped instead of killed， and make Harley a bad person are so suden which make the activities of Harley seem odd！
ReplyDeleteSO I advise to redo the part 7，Daniles and Bianca should find why Harley and Ralphie are involved，not because Harley was bad person，BECAUSE Officer Harley and Ralphie was also swapped because of a similiar event happened long time ago，and Harley and Ralphie also chosed to train each other to impersonate each other then and tried to work together to swap back，and the swapped Harley and Ralphie have accepted their new identity and life！ So there are no intented swap，but two accidents which make the old cop couple become crime couple and vice versa，which make old men become new women and vice versa.
Shoot I just saw your comment. I was afraid of this when I first wrote part 7. I hoped I could fill that pot hole, apparently not very well. Let me see what I can do, Now that Part 8 is out, and I'm not willing to rewrite two captions (time becoming an issue) I'll need to find a way to fix this error without effecting part 8.
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